The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows
urban
areas population percentage in four Southeast Asian countries between 1970 to 2020, with projections until 2040.
Correct article usage
the urban
Overall
, all states, except the Phillipines
, face an increase throughout the given period.
Malaysia started the period at 30% in 1970 and Correct your spelling
Philippines
continue
to Correct subject-verb agreement
continues
climbed
up at just above 70% in 2020 and is projected to reach well above 80% in 2040. Change the verb
climb
Similarly
, while
Indonesia started with only approximately 13% in the recorded period, the number keep
increased significantly and surpassed Thailand and the Verb problem
apply
Phillipines
in 2010 after Correct your spelling
Philippines
reached
over 40% and is set to increase continually.
Wrong verb form
reaching
In contrast
, began at around 30%, after
steady Correct word choice
and after
grow
until 1990, the number plummeted to around 40% in 2010. Replace the word
growth
Nontheless
, it is already recovered and Correct your spelling
Nonetheless
projected
to hit above 50% in 2040. Add a missing verb
is projected
On the other hand
, after Thailand had a rise to below 30% in 1990, the percentage faced moderate
rise between 1990 and 2020 at around 30% Correct article usage
a moderate
although
is expected to rise significantly to under 50% in 2040.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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