Task 1. The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below indicates the data on the
number
of people who participated in five different types of activities at one social center
in Melbourne, Australia in the period from 2000 to 2020. Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, the number
of film club and martial arts members fluctuated steadily during twenty years
. However
, the trend for table tennis was dramatically increased, and there was a significant decrease in the number
of participants
for amateur dramatics. As can be seen, the film club had the highest number
of participants
over the years
. The film club maintained approximately 65 players, even the lowest point was 60 people in 2010. If we look at martial arts, the trend was similar, this
activity remained stable at around 35 contributors in these years
. In addition
, table tennis is a well-known sport in Melbourne. There was an erratic fluctuation in table tennis in the first teen years
, and it rapidly grew in the teen years
after. Similarly
, musical performances, which started in 2005, experienced gradual growth, reaching nearly 20 participants
after 15 years
. By contrast
, the members of amateur dramatic went in the opposite direction. Despite of taking fluctuated around 38 participants
before 2005, it fell sharply to just nearly 5 people in 2020.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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