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The bar charts illustrate the number of US households categorized by the level of annual income between 2007 and 2015 with 3-year intervals.

The bar charts illustrate the number of US households categorized by the level of annual income between 2007 and 2015 with 3-year intervals.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
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 of US
households
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 categorized by the level of annual income between 2007 and 2015 with 3-year intervals.
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, it can be seen that
households
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 which had
incomes
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 more than 100,000
dollars
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 per year occupied the greatest
number
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 over the
period
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,
while
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households
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 with
incomes
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 between 75,000 and 100,000
dollars
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 was the smallest group for 6 years. The remains showed fluctuation in numbers across the given
period
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. In 2007, the
number
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 of
households
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 that had more than 100,000
dollars
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 in income per year, starting with just below 30 million and dropping slightly to roughly 27 million in 2011 before increasing substantially to the highest place with 33%
at the end
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. Followed by those who had
incomes
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 between 25,000 and 50,000
dollars
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, beginning at 27% and
continued
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 to increase to reach its peak at 30% by 2011, experiencing a gradual decrease to 29% till the end. Meanwhile,
households
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 with 50,000-80,000 and 75,000-100,000 remained steadily at approximately the same
number
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 throughout the
period
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 with 20% and 15% respectively.
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, those who gained less than 25,000 showed an increase from 25% in 2007 to 26% in 2015. In conclusion, the
number
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 of
households
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 that had more than 100,000
dollars
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 had the highest share, followed by those who had
incomes
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 between 25,000 and 50,000
dollars
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. In constant,
households
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 with 50,000-80,000 and 75,000-100,000 remained constant during the
period
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, with relatively low.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, incomes, dollars, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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