The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved

to the capital city of a particular country.
The line chart below gives data about reasons for moving to the capital cities or specific regions.
It is clear that
employment and education are the most popular motives for
people
to change their location, since figures of these options were always higher than others and in 2015
numbers
came to the same level, at around 87.000
people
.
Nevertheless
, education was two times less than the work option in 2000, but it became as important as employment by 2015.
Moreover
, schooling saw a little decrease between 2005 and 2010, but
after
this
period these
numbers
increased rapidly. One can notice that relations and entertainment are the least chosen reason for moving. The
numbers
were the same at the beginning of the period, around 11.000 of
people
in 2000.
While
figures of adventures remained stable over the whole period,
numbers
of
people
coming to new places owing to family, saw a moderate growth between 2000 and 2010.
Although
, by 2015
this
amount of
people
decreased slightly,
at the end
option friends was approximately 10 more than adventures
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, numbers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocation
  • migration
  • employment opportunities
  • educational facilities
  • vibrant lifestyle
  • healthcare access
  • medical services
  • social connections
  • infrastructure
  • transport facilities
  • data trends
  • survey results
  • capital city
  • allure
  • motivating factor
  • influencing
  • attracting
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • assessment
  • consideration
  • exploration
  • introduction
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