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The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrates how much
money
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 was given to third-world nations from five organisations between the
years
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 2008 and 2011.
Overall
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,
Organisation
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 2 was the dominant one that sent
money
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 in the
years
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 2010 and 2008.
On the other hand
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,
Organisation
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 4 was the least
organisation
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 that sent
money
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 in all
years
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. The amount of
money
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 from
Organisation
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 2 increased dramatically when it sent about 1.5
billion
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dollars
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 in 2008 and 2009 to about 2.5
billion
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dollars
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 in 2010 and 2011.
While
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 the
money
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 from
Organisation
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 5 saw a gradual decrease from 1.5
billion
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dollars
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 in 2008 to less than 0.5
billion
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dollars
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 in 2011.
However
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, the amount of
money
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 sent from the other organisations fluctuated in all
years
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 between more than 0.5
billion
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dollars
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 to less than 1
billion
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dollars
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 in
Organisation
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 1, less than 1.5
billion
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dollars
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 to 1.75
billion
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dollars
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 in
Organisation
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 3, and less than 0.5
billion
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dollars
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 to 1.25
billion
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dollars
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 in
Organisation
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 4.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, years, organisation, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amount of money
  • developing countries
  • organisations
  • from 2008 to 2011
  • given to
  • funding
  • analyze
  • examine
  • discuss
  • evaluate
  • explore
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • trends
  • data
  • chart
  • purpose
  • overview
  • key findings
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