The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the past view of the village of Ryemouth in 1995 and how it has developed now over the many decades.
overall
,
it is clear that
significant changes occurred during the period. Some new features
such
as a car
park
, rising port,and tennis court are added ,
while
some existing features either be altered or removed to accommodate the expansion now. In 1995, there is
the
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farmland occupied
at
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the south-east corner and in the south side sea,
was
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south corner
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shops and fish markets
are
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placed
two
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sides of the road. The most significant feature was the forest
park
and
also
there is a fishing port
that is
placed into the sea. Now we see many prominent changes that occurred, the main change is new golf and tennis altered the place where farmland and forest
park
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parks
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have been occupied. Shop refurbished as restaurants and fish markets became apartments. There is an expansion of housing now than in the past. In order to facilitate the car
park
was built near the hotel. The fishing port disappeared completely
whereas
the cafe remained
lay
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in the same place.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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