The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the past view of the village of Ryemouth in 1995 and how it has developed now over the many decades.
overall
, it is clear that
significant changes occurred during the period. Some new features such
as a car park
, rising port,and tennis court are added , while
some existing features either be altered or removed to accommodate the expansion now.
In 1995, there is the
farmland occupied Correct article usage
apply
at
the south-east corner and in the south side sea, Change preposition
apply
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
south corner
shops and fish markets Add a hyphen
south-corner
are
placed Wrong verb form
were
two
sides of the road. The most significant feature was the forest Change preposition
on two
park
and also
there is a fishing port that is
placed into the sea.
Now we see many prominent changes that occurred, the main change is new golf and tennis altered the place where farmland and forest park
have been occupied. Shop refurbished as restaurants and fish markets became apartments. There is an expansion of housing now than in the past. In order to facilitate the car Fix the agreement mistake
parks
park
was built near the hotel. The fishing port disappeared completely whereas
the cafe remained lay
in the same place.Correct word choice
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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