The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
age
and crime
relationship, while
the pie chart
describes the types of crime
in the UK, last
year.
Overall
, it is clear from the line graph that the highest crime
rate
is between the ages of 16 and 24. The data on the pie chart
reveals that the most popular crime
is violent crime
, while
public order crime
is the least popular crime
in the UK.
The peak of the crime
rate
took place between the ages of 12 and 16. The highest number is 80 tens of thousands at the age
of 20. After the age
of 20, the crime
rate
decreased sharply until 28. After the age
of 28, the crime
rate
started to fall off slightly.
The biggest portion on the pie chart
is violent crime
with 46 per cent
, followed by property crime
with
23 per Change preposition
at
cent
and drug crime
with
22 per Change preposition
at
cent
. The public order crime
took the smallest place on the chart
, with 9 per cent
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