Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think that the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages ? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Museums

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always attract local and international

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since it houses objects of historical, scientific and artistic

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and

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increased attraction often encourages several

museums

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to collect money at the

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. Even though

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practice has a few drawbacks, I believe that charging the

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at these tourist attractions brings more positive aspects.

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of collecting

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is that it can be very helpful to manage the operational cost of

museums

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.

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, these

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are operated all

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year round and

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the cost of managing these

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could be extremely high. So the

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fee

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that these

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collect from museum lovers can be utilized for

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utility bills or maintenance expenses. A good example of

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can be seen in South Indian

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where they manage the

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expenses only with the

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fee

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as there are no state funds for these

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. The other major benefit is that

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indirectly helps to control the crowd. To be more precise, If the

entrance

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is free, the amount of arrivals, including fake

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, would be high. So, paying a

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for

entrance

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would deter these unwanted

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here. In spite of the above positive features, charging admission will

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bring some drawbacks. A common criticism of

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fee

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is that

museums

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are no longer affordable for people who belong to

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class.

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is really unfair since they are deprived of their interests.

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, it is highly possible that overseas

travelers

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travellers

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tend to keep away from these attractions because paying money to learn about another country may be unacceptable to them. Museum authorities in my country

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already started to point

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ticket

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fee

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as the main factor for the low number of international

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. In conclusion,

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charging the

entrance

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may cause a few negative consequences like

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number of

visitors

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,

museums

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receive enormous benefits

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as

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funds

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for maintenance and avoiding unnecessary

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.

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,

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should be practiced but the charges should be reasonable.