Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think that the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages ? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Museums

always attract local and international

visitors

since it houses objects of historical, scientific and artistic

interests

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interest

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and

this

increased attraction often encourages several

museums

to collect money at the

entrance

. Even though

this

practice has a few drawbacks, I believe that charging the

entrance

at these tourist attractions brings more positive aspects.

To begin

with , an argument

infavour

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in favour

in favor

of collecting

entrance

fee

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fees

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is that it can be very helpful to manage the operational cost of

museums

.

In other words

, these

places

are operated all

the

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year round and

thus

the cost of managing these

places

could be extremely high. So the

ticket

fee

that these

places

collect from museum lovers can be utilized for

its

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utility bills or maintenance expenses. A good example of

this

can be seen in South Indian

museums

where they manage the

day to day

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expenses only with the

ticket

fee

as there are no state funds for these

places

. The other major benefit is that

this

ticket

fee

indirectly helps to control the crowd. To be more precise, If the

entrance

is free, the amount of arrivals, including fake

visitors

, would be high. So, paying a

fee

for

entrance

would deter these unwanted

visitors

to go

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here. In spite of the above positive features, charging admission will

also

bring some drawbacks. A common criticism of

ticket

fee

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fees

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is that

museums

are no longer affordable for people who belong to

lower

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the lower

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class.

This

is really unfair since they are deprived of their interests.

Furthermore

, it is highly possible that overseas

travelers

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tend to keep away from these attractions because paying money to learn about another country may be unacceptable to them. Museum authorities in my country

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already started to point

the

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ticket

fee

as the main factor for the low number of international

visitors

. In conclusion,

although

charging the

entrance

may cause a few negative consequences like

decreased

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number of

visitors

,

museums

receive enormous benefits

such

as

fund

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funds

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for maintenance and avoiding unnecessary

crowd

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crowds

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.

Therefore

,

this

should be practiced but the charges should be reasonable.