The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year
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the
information about Australian employees Correct article usage
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last
year, breaking down with
two different aspects; sex and job type, indicated as percentages.
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Overall
, it can be clearly observed that majority
of workers were primarily men, Correct article usage
the majority
whereas
that
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of
some Change preposition
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works
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such
as professionals and clerical one
were replaced by women. Correct pronoun usage
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However
, it is interesting to note that Australian peoples
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people
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clerk
in the previous year.
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clerks
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shown
that men accounted for Wrong verb form
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work force
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workforce
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laborers
at 40%. Meanwhile, the figures Change the spelling
labourers
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females counterpart
were generally lower than 50%, excluding those who worked in professional and clerical at 70% and 98%,respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
female counterparts
Additionally
, only female clerks and professional staffs
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staff
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outnumbered Correct pronoun usage
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males
figures and possessed the fewest gap between Change the noun form
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two
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the two
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.
In regards to types of work, clerical jobs Change to a plural noun
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peoples
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laborers
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peoples
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people
while
laborers
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labourers
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roughly about 700,000 persons.Change the verb form
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