The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The two pie charts represent the marital status of the populations in two different nations: Canada and Australia, indicated as percentages.
Overall
, it is clearly observed that the majority of Canadians are separated but not divorced, Linking Words
whereas
that of Australians are married. Linking Words
However
, it is interesting to note that Linking Words
same sex
marriage is legal in Canada.
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same-sex
To begin
with, in Canada, Linking Words
at
53% of its Change preposition
apply
populations
is the largest Fix the agreement mistake
population
percentages
among all other groups, followed by those who married at slightly above a quarter, at 29%. Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
However
, the remaining percentages from Linking Words
a solitude groups
can be Correct the article-noun agreement
a solitude group
solitude groups
breakdown as
single, widowed, and divorced, the former two groups accounted for the same figures at 7%, Correct your spelling
broken down into
while
the latter is only 1%. Surprisingly, the number of homosexual Linking Words
marriage
is 2% greater than those who divorced.
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marriages
In
the contrary, a closer look at the pie chart shows alternative figures of the marital status in Australia. It may Change the preposition
On
seems
that Australians who are married outnumber those who Change the verb form
seem
only
separated with 5% larger, at 46% and 41%, respectively. Meanwhile, the number of Add a missing verb
are only
widowed
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widows
are
tripled that of divorced at 2%, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
single
Australians are only 5%.Correct word choice
and single
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