The diagram below shows the Life Sycle of a frog.
The diagram shows the natural process life cycle of a frog from the embryo
stage
, through seven developmental phases from tadpole to fully grown amphibian.
Initially
, the fertilised eggs grow into embryos, from which tiny tadpoles emerge and shelter under plants in the water or pond. The tadpole begins life black in colour, and it has a long tail
and shorter body. As it grows, external gills for breathing are produced while
subsequent stages in its development include a longer tail
and when this
stage
is complete, back limbs begin to appear which allows the tiny creature to swim faster.
The baby frog is nourished by food and nutrients stored in its tail
, and the next stage
in the cycle is for the front limbs to begin
growing while
the tail
shrinks and eventually disappears. At each stage
, the creature continues to enlarge significantly and changes in colour from black,
to dark green and ultimately to bright green.
Once the Remove the comma
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tail
has disappeared, the frog is supported on four limbs and continues, in the final phase, to develop into a full-sized amphibian.Submitted by lioness1970 on
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