The diagram below shows the Life Sycle of a frog.

The diagram below shows the Life Sycle of a frog.
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The diagram shows the natural process life cycle of a frog from the embryo
stage
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, through seven developmental phases from tadpole to fully grown amphibian.  
Initially
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, the fertilised eggs grow into embryos, from which tiny tadpoles emerge and shelter under plants in the water or pond. The tadpole begins life black in colour, and it has a long
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and shorter body. As it grows, external gills for breathing are produced 
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subsequent stages in its development include a longer
tail
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and when
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stage
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is complete, back limbs begin to appear which allows the tiny creature to swim faster. The baby frog is nourished by food and nutrients stored in its
tail
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, and the next
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in the cycle is for the front limbs
to begin
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growing
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the
tail
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shrinks and eventually disappears. At each
stage
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, the creature continues to enlarge significantly and changes in colour from black
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to dark green and ultimately to bright green. Once the
tail
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has disappeared, the frog is supported on four limbs and continues, in the final phase, to develop into a full-sized amphibian.

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