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The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where

The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where
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The bar chart displays the
aid
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 received from developed countries to developing countries between 2008 and 2010 .
Overall
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, the US has sent the highest number of
aid
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 compared to other countries ,
on the contrary
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, Sweden showed the lowest participation among all . Netherlands and Sweden given
aid
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 fluctuated within a range under 10
Billion
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 between 2008 and 2008 with the year 2009 being the highest in both . UK and Japan figures showed higher presented
aid
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 budgets, but both showed a decrease in 2009 to 10
billion
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then
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 rose again in 2010 to roughly over
this
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 figure . UK
aid
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 rose constantly from 10
billion
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 to almost 15
billion
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 by the year 2010 . The US is the country that gave the biggest
aid
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 in comparison starting with over 20
billion
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 in 2008
then
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 dropping to exactly 20
billion
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, and rose again to almost 25
billion
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 in 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aid, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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