The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where
The bar chart displays the
aid
received from developed countries to developing countries between 2008 and 2010 .
Overall
, the US has sent the highest number of aid
compared to other countries , on the contrary
, Sweden showed the lowest participation among all .
Netherlands and Sweden given aid
fluctuated within a range under 10 Billion
between 2008 and 2008 with the year 2009 being the highest in both .
UK and Japan figures showed higher presented aid
budgets, but both showed a decrease in 2009 to 10 billion
then
rose again in 2010 to roughly over this
figure . UK aid
rose constantly from 10 billion
to almost 15 billion
by the year 2010 . The US is the country that gave the biggest aid
in comparison starting with over 20 billion
in 2008 then
dropping to exactly 20 billion
, and rose again to almost 25 billion
in 2010.Submitted by hindgadeem123 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words aid, billion with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!