The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the standard
wages
of UK citizens in 7 different cities. The only cities outside of England are Glasgow and Edinburgh. Units are given in
pounds
sterling.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
while
London has the highest amount of salaries Birmingham has the lowest
wages
.
To begin
with, in all cities, average
wages
are higher than 25,000
pounds
. Standard earnings in Manchester are slightly higher than in Birmingham, which has the lowest average incomes, which are 25,909 and 25,531 respectively.
Additionally
, the residents of Glasgow earn nearly 200
pounds
more than workers who work in Manchester.
Moreover
, the employees who work in Bristol, Edinburgh and Cambridge have more than 27,000
pounds
in standard
wages
.
In addition
, there is a huge difference between the standard salaries of workers who live in London and Cambridge. To better illustrate, citizens of London earn more than just below 4000
pounds
compared to employees of Cambridge, which are 33,634 and 29,859 respectively.
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