The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrates an Australian town, where rainwater is
havested
for drinking by collecting it and storing it for later use.
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harvested
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, to prevent contaminated water
from entering the human body, the water
undergoes fine stages of cleaning to ensure it becomes safer for consumption.
After rainfall, the water
flows through pipes to a filter where it is cleaned. These filters help to remove unwanted particles and bad smells. Once filters
, the Wrong verb form
filtered
water
is stored to provide a reliable supply for future use. Then
it undergoes additional treatment to reduce harmful chemicals and substances. Water
treatment removes contaminants and impurities from the liquid, making it clean and safe for drinking and other uses. Finally
, the purfied
Correct your spelling
purified
water
is ready for consumption, ensuring that the public can enjoy it with confidence and safety.Submitted by amirkhanovaak on
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