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Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog.

#neighbor #dog #night
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Dear Neighbor, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. My name is Emili, and I am writing to formally request you, your dog barks every day, it bothers me not only the day
,
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 but
also
 the night. I have carefully considered the need for
dog
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a dog
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, and after
through
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 consideration, I believe that you will find
way
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to calm your dog. I understand that
this
 may not be easy because you do not only have
this
 issue, but so many, and I am open to discussing ways to address these issues collaboratively. I am confident that by doing so we both can benefit from its results, and I believe that it will not be much of a problem,and it would positively impact our progress. Thank you for taking the time to review my request. I am more than willing to provide any additional information or clarification if needed. I look forward to the possibility of fulfilling my request and appreciate your attention to
this
 matter.
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 faithfully, Emili
Submitted by Teo Halimov on

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complete response
The letter addresses the issue, but it could provide more details or suggestions on how the neighbor can address the barking. Being more specific can make your request clearer and more actionable.
logical structure
Some sentences are unclear or awkwardly phrased (e.g., 'I have carefully considered the need for dog'). Review these to ensure clarity and coherence.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. You have a few instances where ideas are mixed, which can be confusing for the reader. Try to separate your points more clearly.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and considerate, which is appropriate for the context.
greeting and closing
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which helps frame the request professionally.
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