The graph below shows the number of public transit passengers from 1989 to 2009 and bus and tram passenger numbers between 2000 and 2008 in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of public transportation use between 1989 and 2009 alongside those of bus
and tram
users from 2000 to 2008 over a period of 8 years in the city.
It can be clearly seen that the number
of total public transit users consistently increased while
there was also
an upward trend for bus
and tram
passengers
. In addition
, at the end
of the timescale, the bus
was used more in common compared to the tram
users.
Turning to the graph in more detail, 290million
of Melbourne’s citizens used public transportation in 1989 and the Correct your spelling
290 million
number
of passengers
steadily increased except for the period between 1989 to 1994. In the meantime, the figures
for passengers
reached a peak of 500million in 2009.
Looking at the second line graph, the number
of tram
passengers
was higher than the number
of bus
passengers
until 2005, when both figures
were equal at 150million each. After that time, the number
of bus
passengers
continued to rise while
the figures
for tram
soared in 2007, ascending to roughly 220million. Fix the agreement mistake
trams
Finally
, in 2008, both figures
climbed substantially and passed 100million each.Submitted by zizi03199 on
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