Nowadays, it is becoming
common for
people
to use
computers
and electronic
devices
to search some
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.
While
some
people
think that there is no need to have printed
media
, I,
however
strongly disagree with
this
idea.
Firstly
,
computers
and other electronic
devices
could expose blue light radiation which may reduce user's
eye
health.
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people
, especially employees who spend their
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working
time
in front of the
computers
will affected
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this
, resulting in the potential use of
eye glassesCorrect your spelling
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.
Therefore
, employers should give
eye
treatment complimentary for their workers and provide printed sources for them to offer flexible choices
while
working.
Furthermore
, reading and learning from
handed bookCorrect your spelling
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will reduce
people
's screen
time
and encourage them to have better eyesight.
Secondly
, there are several apps inside electronic
devices
,
such
as social
media
TikTok and online games which could make
people
have
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attention span. With
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technology and
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built for their users to always
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into their apps, it will make their users
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spend more and more hours
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and they not
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productive at all.
As a result
,
this
might reduce their ability and cognitive system to learn something scientific or just
comprehentlyCorrect your spelling
comprehend
comprehensibly
competently
read something in
longerAdd an article
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time
, since
addicted to electronic
devices
.
Therefore
,
people
should
their reliance
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computers
and try to spend their
time
to readChange the verb form
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printed
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or
newspaperFix the agreement mistake
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so they may have longer focus and not
easilyAdd a missing verb
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distracted.
In conclusion,
while
there is a significant trend for
people
to use their electronic
devices
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daily tasks, I believe that
people
still need the
of printed
media
due to
the various benefits. Reading printed
media
can reduce their addiction to
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to maintain their
eye
health from blue light radiation.