The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates information about the
percentage
of citizens purchasing and consuming tea and
coffee
habits during the
last
4 weeks in five Australian cities.
Overall
, it can be seen that having tea or
coffee
in a café was the most common habit, except in Adelaide.
While
purchasing fresh
coffee
was the least popular way in all five cities.
According to
the chart, in Sydney and Melbourne, individuals who prefer to go to a café to have a drink showed a
percentage
of 61 and 64 respectively. After that, buying
instant
coffee
is the most common way with around 45 and 48% of applicants. In Sydney, fresh
coffee
is almost as popular as
instant
coffee
with 44%.
However
, in Melbourne, it is 43%. In Hobart, we can observe the same trend
although
the
percentage
of
instant
coffee
is significantly higher than fresh one. In Adelaide, different figures are depicted. The habit of purchasing
instant
coffee
is the most favourite with 50% and after that going to café with a one per cent difference.
However
, like other cities fresh
coffee
is the least regular habit with a
percentage
of 35% almost like Brisbane.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, instant with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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