The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development on the site
The given maps illustrate the current and future plans of the Norbition industrial
area
.
Overall
,it is obvious by contrast
that most of today's factories will be replaced with housing in the future and will be constructed new facilities.
As the maps show,it is visible that today's 7 factories will be changed to housing and a school will be constructed in the east area
of industry and above it a playground is expected to be built.Furthermore
,in the centre
of the area
2 facilities,namely shops and a medical centre
will be established which are located in the south of the map.According to
the future plan,it is predicted that a new road in the northwest of the centre
will be crossed by new housing.Afterwards,hey
are gonna build another roundabout a bit smaller than the old one on the southern side of the town. Correct your spelling
they
In addition
,there will be built one massive bridge in the middle of the river with access to the city centre
.By contrast
,there will be one block of housing after crossing the bridge in the north of the industrial area
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