The bat chart below gives information about how familes in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information and make comparison.
The bar charts show the percentages of weekly income which was spent by households in specific categories in 1968
comparing
with 2018.
Wrong verb form
compared
Overall
, it can be seen that food
contributed to the largest share in
weekly spending in 1968, Change preposition
of
while
Leisure hold
the greatest percentage in 2018.
In 1968, most families allocated their income to Wrong verb form
held
food
with 35%, contributing to the highest share. Followed by housing and clothing, which had the same level at 10%. While
Fuel and power was
the least popular for spending with just above 5 %, the other remains showed the same percentage at approximately 7.5%.
Change the verb form
were
However
, in 2018, leisure had a significant growth to roughly 23%, while
food
experienced a substantial drop, lowering its spending compared to food
. Housing and transports, also
rise to nearly 20% and 14%, respectively. In contrast
, a negative decline occurred in fuel and power, clothing and personal goods, accounting for 4%, 5% and 4% respectively. Meanwhile, household goods remained steady at 7.5%.
In summary, Although
, food
experienced a sharp drop, a considerable incline saw
in leisure, housing and Wrong verb form
was seen
transports
. Household goods remained constant at the same level in both years.Fix the agreement mistake
transport
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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