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The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
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The bar chart displays the
amount
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number
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 of travelled
kilometres
 that a
person
 took in
one
week
 by 5 different transportation in the UK between the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, the total
kilometres
 taken by a
person
 increased in 10 years from 1990 to 2000. The
distances
 travelled per
person
 per
week
 by bus, rail, and air slightly rose whilst there was a decline in the
distances
 which were taken by bicycle and motorbike. In 1990, the bus was
leading
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 transportation system with 40
kilometres
 per
person
 in
one
week
, and it prevented its first place in 2000 with over 40
kilometres
. Individuals' second choice of vehicle was the train with over 35
kilometres
 in 1990.
Moreover
, railway transportation had a slight increase and approached 40
kilometres
 for
one
person
 for
one
week
 in 2000. Despite, people
were
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hardly using air transport in 1990, the airway was the other transport system that people chose in 2000 with a rise of around 5
kilometres
 per
week
.
On the other hand
, people didn't prefer to travel by bicycle and by motorbike in 1990.
Furthermore
, the taken
distances
 by bike and motorbike decreased to almost zero in 2000. The total
distances
traveled
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 by an individual increased by around 10% to 110 in ten years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, person, one, week, distances with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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