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The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
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The bar chart displays the
amount
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number
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 of travelled
kilometres
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 that a
person
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 took in
one
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week
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 by 5 different transportation in the UK between the years 1990 and 2000.
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, the total
kilometres
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 taken by a
person
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 increased in 10 years from 1990 to 2000. The
distances
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 travelled per
person
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 per
week
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 by bus, rail, and air slightly rose whilst there was a decline in the
distances
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 which were taken by bicycle and motorbike. In 1990, the bus was
leading
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 transportation system with 40
kilometres
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 per
person
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 in
one
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week
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, and it prevented its first place in 2000 with over 40
kilometres
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. Individuals' second choice of vehicle was the train with over 35
kilometres
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 in 1990.
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, railway transportation had a slight increase and approached 40
kilometres
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 for
one
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person
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 for
one
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week
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 in 2000. Despite, people
were
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hardly using air transport in 1990, the airway was the other transport system that people chose in 2000 with a rise of around 5
kilometres
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 per
week
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.
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, people didn't prefer to travel by bicycle and by motorbike in 1990.
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, the taken
distances
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 by bike and motorbike decreased to almost zero in 2000. The total
distances
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traveled
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travelled
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 by an individual increased by around 10% to 110 in ten years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, person, one, week, distances with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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