The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the building transformation of Happy Valley Shopping Centre
between1982
and 2012.
Correct your spelling
between 1982
Overall
, there was a major change in the building size and Linking Words
tenants
placement inside. Change noun form
tenants'
tenant's
Morever
, some new facilities are introduced, Correct your spelling
Moreover
whereas
the natural Linking Words
area
Use synonyms
have
been removed.
In 1982, there was a lake located near the road entrance to the shopping centre building. Change the verb form
has
Furthermore
, there are 26 trees around the Linking Words
bulding
. A lobby Correct your spelling
building
area
welcomed us at the front door and it was between a coffee shop and toilets. Moving to the west Use synonyms
side
, a large entertainment Use synonyms
area
was in the center of Use synonyms
floor
, Add an article
the floor
locating
between a food Wrong verb form
located
store
and elevators to the second floor. The Use synonyms
commercials
Change the noun form
commercial
area
was spotted on the western Use synonyms
side
of Use synonyms
building
, they are Add an article
the building
a building
Correct article usage
a sport
sport
Change the noun form
sports
store
, electronic Use synonyms
store
, Use synonyms
furniture
Correct word choice
and furniture
store
.
By 2012, the shopping Use synonyms
center
became wider, removing the lake and adding a parking lot which directly connected to the entrance Change the spelling
centre
area
. A large furniture retail was seen on the eastern Use synonyms
side
of the building. Use synonyms
While
the entertainment Linking Words
area
Use synonyms
was remain
unchanged, the sports Change the verb form
remained
center
and electronics Change the spelling
centre
store
were replaced Use synonyms
to
across the elevators. The western Change preposition
apply
side
of the building Use synonyms
were
transformed to be theme restaurants and a food Change the verb form
was
store
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the number of trees around the building reduced to 23 trees.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side, store with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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