The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the building transformation of Happy Valley Shopping Centre
between1982
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between 1982
and 2012.
Overall
, there was a major change in the building size and
tenants
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placement inside.
Morever
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Moreover
, some new facilities are introduced,
whereas
the natural
area
have
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been removed. In 1982, there was a lake located near the road entrance to the shopping centre building.
Furthermore
, there are 26 trees around the
bulding
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building
. A lobby
area
welcomed us at the front door and it was between a coffee shop and toilets. Moving to the west
side
, a large entertainment
area
was in the center of
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,
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between a food
store
and elevators to the second floor. The
commercials
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area
was spotted on the western
side
of
building
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the building
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, they are
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a sport
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sport
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store
, electronic
store
,
furniture
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and furniture
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store
. By 2012, the shopping
center
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centre
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became wider, removing the lake and adding a parking lot which directly connected to the entrance
area
. A large furniture retail was seen on the eastern
side
of the building.
While
the entertainment
area
was remain
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unchanged, the sports
center
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centre
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and electronics
store
were replaced
to
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across the elevators. The western
side
of the building
were
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was
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transformed to be theme restaurants and a food
store
.
In addition
, the number of trees around the building reduced to 23 trees.
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