Topic: The graph bellow gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The charts Philippines have the second and the third places with just over 50% and around 45% of individuals respectively. The top three places are predicted to be in the same order in the years 2030 and 2040.
illustrates
the ratio of the people, who lived in towns, in 4 different far eastern countries (Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) from 1970 to 2020. Change the verb form
illustrate
Also
, it can be seen the future expectations for the next 20 years.
Overall
, all the percentages of the population in cities
in four contries
increased from 1970 to now. Correct your spelling
countries
Moreover
, these values are expected to continue rising in 2030 and 2040.
At the current time, the most crowded cities
are in Malaysia with almost 80% of people. The cities
of Indonesia andCorrect article usage
the
Furthermore
, it is predicted that all the countries would
have over 50% of the citizens living in the Wrong verb form
will
cities
20 years later.
In 1970, Philippines
had the most crowded Correct article usage
the Philippines
cities
wit
over 30% of people. It rose in 2010 after fluctuating between 1970 and 2010. Indonesia has the lowest number of individuals who were living in the Correct your spelling
with
cities
with around 15% in 1970. It had a dramatical
increase and reached around 30% as same as Thailand in 2000.Replace the word
dramatic
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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