The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the highest average temperature recorded in each month for three different cities namely
Paris
,
Dubai
and Sydney in the
year
2016.
Overall
, both
Paris
and
Dubai
had the maximum temperature in the middle of the
year
,
while
Sydney's high temperature was at begin and end of the
year
. On one hand ,
Paris
and
Dubai
's temperatures started on January
by
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5 and almost 19
degrees
respectively
then
both
degrees
increased steadily to hit the peak in August for
Dubai
was roughly 36
along
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with
Paris
was 20 after that
dgree
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degrees
declined back again .
On the other hand
, Sydney's temperament seems to be completely the opposite it started at the high figure in January at about 23
degrees
followed by gradually falling towards the bottom to 14 in July
then
it jumped up
at the end
of the
year
by
additional
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an additional
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10
degrees
.
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