The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the highest average temperature recorded in each month for three different cities namely
Paris
, Dubai
and Sydney in the year
2016.
Overall
, both Paris
and Dubai
had the maximum temperature in the middle of the year
, while
Sydney's high temperature was at begin and end of the year
.
On one hand , Paris
and Dubai
's temperatures started on January by
5 and almost 19 Change preposition
at
degrees
respectively then
both degrees
increased steadily to hit the peak in August for Dubai
was roughly 36 along
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Paris
was 20 after that dgree
declined back again .
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degrees
On the other hand
, Sydney's temperament seems to be completely the opposite it started at the high figure in January at about 23 degrees
followed by gradually falling towards the bottom to 14 in July then
it jumped up at the end
of the year
by additional
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an additional
degrees
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