The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent  their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart compares information about in one country how
families
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spent their weekly budget in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the highest proportion of spending was on food and the least was on fuel and power. Regarding food, in 1968
families
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spent 35% of their weekly
income
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and
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figure declined to about 17% in 2018. Turning to housing, 10% of weekly
income
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was spent in 1968 and it increased sed to around 19% in 2018. In household goods,
families
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spent the same, at about 8% in both 1968 and 2018. In 1968,
families
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spent about 9% of their weekly
income
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on transport and in 2018,
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figure increased to 14%. In leisure,
families
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spent 9% of their
income
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in 1968 and
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figure grew gradually to about 22%. Regarding clothing and footwear, in 1968 they spent 10% of their
income
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and in 2018 it decreased to 5%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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