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The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
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The provided graph portrays the distance travelled per person by five distinct modes of travel between the years 1990 and 2000. Bicycles, Motorbike, Air, Bus, and Rail are the means displayed
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 a total distance section.
To begin
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 with, it is pertinent to note that the total kilometres by the five modes of travelling in the given decade have increased by nearly 10.
In addition
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, apparently, more pupils have a liking towards the Railway and bus transportation system, since they are the most used commutes standing nearly 38 and 40km respectively.
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, these two Air travel modes have shown an increment over the
last
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 ten years. The aforementioned types of transportation see an
overall
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 betterment.
In contrast
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, bicycles and motorbikes display minimal use, which in turn
further
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 decreased from the start of 1990 to the end of 2000. Comparatively, these remain the only ways to decrease in the period.

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