The chart below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The two graphs illustrate data on the place and variety of
dance
tutors teenagers
in a small city in Australia.
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for teenagers
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that in location
of Add an article
the location
a location
dance
place percentage, the important figure is private studios. Correct article usage
the dance
In addition
, for types of dance
classes by ages
the main feature is ballet.
For Fix the agreement mistake
age
location
of Add an article
the location
dance
classes, the main percentage has private studios at nearly a
half and the less significant percentage has school halls at approximately a quarter. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, community halls and other places take the
18%, Correct article usage
apply
while
college-based studios have the minimum per cent at exxactly
10%.
The highest amount of number for ages under 11 is ballet with just under 600 students. Tap and Modern types Correct your spelling
exactly
was
less at just under 500 and 300 children, respectively. With Change the verb form
were
adolscents
who turn 11-16, the numbers Correct your spelling
adolescents
was
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were
mirrorly
for Correct your spelling
mirrored
mirror
yongers
. Balled has 300 students, tap has nearly 425 children, and modern Correct your spelling
youngsters
dance
with about 520 students has the niggest
number for all 11-16 aged people.Correct your spelling
biggest
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