The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending
The given proportions illustrate information about the places and types of
dance
courses in
which teenagers are currently attending in one of the towns of Australia.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, dance
studios are located in several parts of a town, which may be comfortable for those participating. In addition
to that, the types of dance
classes
depend on age, and since it is for teenagers, there are not much number of groups.
Turning to the details, over a
half per cent of studios are private, and Correct article usage
apply
this
figure is twice that of school halls, where teenagers can have classes
only after how school lessons end. Probably, one-fifth of dance
classes
are placed in community halls and other places, also
there is a tiny porch in comparison with college-based studios since their proportions are 18% and 10% respectively.
Moving on next part, there are 3 types of dance
classes
such
as:
ballet, tap, and modern, and young people are separated into two groups: those under 11, and those between 11 and 16. Remove the comma
apply
According to
the number of students, most people under 11 participate in ballet, while
other groups are more interested in modern dances. Probably 400-450 youngsters of
both Change preposition
from
classes
take attendance in a tap.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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