The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending

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which teenagers are currently attending in one of the towns of Australia.

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studios are located in several parts of a town, which may be comfortable for those participating.

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depend on age, and since it is for teenagers, there are not much number of groups. Turning to the details, over

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half per cent of studios are private, and

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figure is twice that of school halls, where teenagers can have

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only after how school lessons end. Probably, one-fifth of

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are placed in community halls and other places,

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there is a tiny porch in comparison with college-based studios since their proportions are 18% and 10% respectively. Moving on next part, there are 3 types of

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ballet, tap, and modern, and young people are separated into two groups: those under 11, and those between 11 and 16.

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the number of students, most people under 11 participate in ballet,

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other groups are more interested in modern dances. Probably 400-450 youngsters

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take attendance in a tap.