The graph below shows the percentage of people going to the gym every month in one country from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the different groups of people
who go to the gym
monthly in a country between 1990 and 2005.
It is obvious that the proportion of the population who go to the gym
monthly has increased in every age
over this
period. Generally, the younger age
group
(18-24) and the elder age
group
(35-44) dramatically changed from 2002 to 2010. However
, the other two groups constantly increased.
By 2002, the percentage in the group
of younger age
(18-24) had significantly increased from 9% to 55%, others gradually increased. After 2002 the younger age
group
(18-24) had decreased relatively then
going upwards. Besides
, the elder group
(35-44) had a generally opposite changing trend than the younger age
group
(18-24).
By 2010, the percentage of people
going to a gym
was highest with 55% in the group
of younger people
, who narrowly transcended middle-aged people
in 1993. The elder group
of people
who got the third highest percentage experienced dramatic changes. The lowest number of people
who go to a gym
monthly is older people
, which only had 11% in 2010.Submitted by l2334993624 on
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