The diagram shows the process of coloured plastic quality control. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the process of coloured plastic quality control. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart
illutrates
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illustrates
how coloured plastic’s quality control is made in a factory.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there are seven man-made steps for controlling the outcomes, which
starts
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with melting
plastics
and
ends
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end
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with
the
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packaging and despatching. That
process
is linear and cannot be repeated again and again.
Firstly
, the plastic is melted and moulded by colours which are red, blue and yellow. After that the first quality control step starts,
machines
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and machines
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check the strength of
plastics
. If any problem is detected in
this
step, the usage of
plastics
are
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rejected and leaves the
process
. There is an unknown stage which is connected to
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the allocation
process
.
Secondly
,
plastics
are separated by hand whether they have mixed or single
colurs
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colours
. The next step ensures
if
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there is
any
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no
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issue in the sorting
process
.
Finally
, unless any problem
found
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,
plastics
are packaged and despatched.
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