The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
These maps illustrate the development in the
town
of Denham between 1986 to today.
Overall
, there have been significant changes in the town
. Firstly
, the farmland
and the shops have been replaced by new houses
and a road in the west of the town
. Moreover
, the farmland
and gardens transformed into houses
and retirement homes, respectively.
There were shops, a post office and a farmland
between River Stoke and the road running from north to east. In addition
, there was farmland
to the northeast of the primary school. Furthermore
, there were gardens adjacent to the road in the middle of the town
.
Shops in the northwest of the town
have been demolished and more houses
have been built. Besides
, the farmland
on the southwest and near the River Stoke has been flattened and new houses
and streets have been constructed instead
of it. Additionally
, gardens on the east of the town
have been replaced by retirement homes. Moreover
, the farmland
to the south of the bridge has been turned into new houses
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