The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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These maps illustrate the development in the
town
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of Denham between 1986 to today.
Overall
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, there have been significant changes in the
town
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.
Firstly
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, the
farmland
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and the shops have been replaced by new
houses
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and a road in the west of the
town
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.
Moreover
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, the
farmland
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and gardens transformed into
houses
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and retirement homes, respectively. There were shops, a post office and a
farmland
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between River Stoke and the road running from north to east.
In addition
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, there was
farmland
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to the northeast of the primary school.
Furthermore
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, there were gardens adjacent to the road in the middle of the
town
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. Shops in the northwest of the
town
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have been demolished and more
houses
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have been built.
Besides
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, the
farmland
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on the southwest and near the River Stoke has been flattened and new
houses
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and streets have been constructed
instead
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of it.
Additionally
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, gardens on the east of the
town
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have been replaced by retirement homes.
Moreover
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, the
farmland
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to the south of the bridge has been turned into new
houses
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, farmland, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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