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Nowadaysthe student have more opportunity to study abroad. what are the advantages and disadvanteges of this devolopment?

#nowadaysthe #student #opportunity #study #disadvanteges #devolopment
Nowadays, the
majorty
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majority
 of
students
 are looking forward
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studing
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studying
 abroad. especially studying in the USA, the UK and Australia. They can study abroad by getting
scholarship
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 or with personal financing.
However
, the decision
of studying
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 in
foreign
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a foreign
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country
 has several advantages and
disadvanteges
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disadvantages
 which will
be discuss
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 in
this
 essay. There are several
benefit
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benefits
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 of studying out of your home
country
. The most important one is
higher
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a higher
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oppurtunity
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opportunity
go
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to
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getting
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get
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better
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a better
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 job position, because of the strong certification
ofrom
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from
international
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an international
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 university.
Also
, studying abroad
enable
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students
from
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to
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engagement
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engage
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 in new
culture
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cultures
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 and New relationships
in addition
 to
expand
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expanding
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 their
perceptiens
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perceptions
.
Further
mare
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more
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, living in
other
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another
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country
 makes the
students
 depend on
themselfs
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themselves
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 and have a strong personality.
On the other hand
,
studing
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studying
abroud
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abroad
 had a lot of difficulties.
For instance
, staying away from
familiy
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family
, home and friends.
therefore
, Foreign
students
sufer fram
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suffer from
 losing stability and
facing
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number
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 of challenges especially financially. They have to
mange
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thier
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their
 money and expenses. So, they need to find a part-time job to
gat
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get
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 some money.
As a
result
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 they
strugle
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struggle
 with time management between
studing
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studying
 and working. In my
opining
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opinion
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,
hard warking
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hard-working
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student
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students
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 can overcome these difficulties. In my
country
, thousands of
students
 travel every year
for studying
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 abroad.
Also
, some jobs
required
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require
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 the employee to go for
advance
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 study abroad. In my point of view, studying abroad is so
impratant
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important
 and its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Clear understanding of the topic and relevant arguments are presented.
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Introduction and conclusion are present and provide a good framework for the essay.
Content
Good attempt to discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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