Describe a time that something changed your life in a good way. You should say: when and where it happened what happened how you felt about it explain how it changed your life in good ways

First,

Life

is do

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does

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not treat us equally. Everybody

born

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is born

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in so different areas, cultures etc.

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of that somebody faced

economical

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economic

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crisis and political conflicts. Me to

member

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a member

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of that group, I am twenty years old university third-grade student but

unfortunately

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unfortunately,

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I am so struggling

taking

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to take

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a job

with

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for

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many

reason

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reasons

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this

experience

not

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is not

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funny

however

some of

highlights

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the highlights

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chance the game for me.

Second,

when I looking for internship programs for knowledge development with hopeless a call

come

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came

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to me from a

telecomminication

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telecommunication

telecommunications

company. They want to see me in

artificial

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an artificial

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intelligence education program in Turkey's capital city Ankara. When I hear details my eyes are grown.

This

company

promising

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promised

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us

affort

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additional

tickets and all included

five star

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five-star

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hotel

accomidation

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accommodation

did you believe that!

This

traine

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training

continue

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continued

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2

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for 2

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month

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months

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with that chance I develop my skills and

meet

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met

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up with many

talent

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talented

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or

professional

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professionals

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this

milestone provide me creating new connections ability.

Besides

end of the

this

program

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program,

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I get a nice

paid

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apply

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job offer. My experience with a word is fantastic İn conclusion, my

challange

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challenge

is

finish

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to finish

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with

a

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apply

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success my feelings

are be improved

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will improve

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I

start

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have started

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to

feeling

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feel

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better because of seeing

future

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the future

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more

clear

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clearly

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.