The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
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graph provides key information about the number of Linking Words
participants
across different activities between the years 2000-2020.
in the social centre in the city of Melbourne, Australia.
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Overall
, the graph shows some activities, like Film club, Martial arts, Amateur dramatics, Table tennis, and Musical performances. And it is obvious to the naked eye that the Film club are expected to remain dominant. Linking Words
In other words
, there is no activity that has more Linking Words
participants
than the Film club. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, we can see in the year 2010, a huge increase in Table tennis Linking Words
participants
, which jumped from Use synonyms
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fourth Correct article usage
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second Correct article usage
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place
in just 5 years. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
last
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place
in the graph, which is Musical performances had an upper-level score to go from the Use synonyms
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stage to the fourth Linking Words
place
.
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but not least, in the same year we can see a dramatic decrease in Amateur dramatics Linking Words
participants
, which transferred from third Use synonyms
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Linking Words
place
in the year 2020.Use synonyms
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