The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income.

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The table describes the proportion of the use of money that 5 different

countries

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's people choose to spend.

It is clear that

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the largest percentage of

earning

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earnings

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is used for spending in each country. The lowest expenditure is in Invest. Out of these 5

countries

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, the money choosing to spend is higher in Morocco and India. Morocco

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has

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the highest

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apply

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spending,

while

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its expenditure on investment is

also

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higher than other

countries

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, at 6.8%. Finland has the largest proportion of money saving, at 14.1%. It can be seen that Pakistan has the lowest percentages of spending and saving, 24.6% and 8.5% respectively. Vietnam has slightly higher figures for spending and saving, but the lowest in

invest

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investment

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among 5

countries

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

120 words

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The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income.

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