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Apologise letter to boss for delaying the project work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apologise for the meeting I missed on September 2nd about
development
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the development
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 plans of the
company
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. I am sincerely sorry for not being able to attend the meeting. I am aware that
this
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 meeting is important for the
company
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, but, unfortunately, my absence was unavoidable. The reason for not attending
this
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 meeting was I had a car accident before
the
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apply
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work on that day.
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 the accident was not serious, I was immediately admitted to
hospital
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the hospital
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 and not compelled to until my doctor
clears
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cleared
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 all the
form
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forms
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. I understand how crucial the meeting was for the
company
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, but I already made a plan with one of
colleagues
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my colleagues
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, Sandra brown, to review all the important highlights of the meeting. We will go over all the project plans and people’s
role
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roles
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 and responsibilities. By the end of the day, I will be up to
the
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apply
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speed
for
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on
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 all of the plans. I hope you will forgive my absence and be assured of my commitment to
this
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company
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 and its future. Yours sincerely, Sumanpreet Kaur
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language
The essay can be improved by addressing a few minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'but, unfortunately, my absence was unavoidable' can be streamlined to 'however, my absence was unavoidable.'
clarity
Ensure that all points are well-reasoned and succinct. There are moments where clarity is affected by elongated sentences.
task response
Consider elaborating slightly more on the steps you are taking to make up for the missed meeting, adding more detail to enhance the completeness of your response.
structure
Your essay has a clear and coherent structure, beginning with an apology, explaining the reason for your absence, and concluding with your planned course of action to address the missed meeting.
introduction conclusion
The introduction and conclusion are well-defined and relevant to the topic.
examples
You provide a clear explanation and relevant examples to justify your absence, which helps convey sincerity.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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