The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table graph illustrates data about third-level education
staff
by six different courses in two spaceific
years ( 2005 and 2013).
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specific
Overall
, all university staff
number
increased over the entire period with the biggest change in architecture, except the Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
staff
number
in agriculture and education decreased slightly. Furthermore
, the biggest number
of staff
was in medicine throughout the period, while
the lowest number
of staff
was in agriculture.
In terms of medicine, they had the highest number
of staff
in 2005 and 2013 by
30664 and 36868 respectively, and the second highest Change preposition
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number
of employees was in business started
at 23128 and Wrong verb form
starting
rose
to 28769 in 2013. Wrong verb form
rising
While
architecture's staff
had a significant change from 2380 in 2005 to 3204 in the last
year, similarly
, art's staff
number
changed by 28,18%.
With regard to sciences and humanities, in 2005 they had ( 19064 and 12088 respectively) then
increased to ( 22092 and 13777 respectively) in 2013. Moreover
, Correct article usage
the tengineering
tengineering
, agriculture and education employee Correct your spelling
engineering
number
was
relatively stable.Change the verb form
were
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