The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
A glance a the graph provided shows information about the number of
participants
for various activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The activities consisted of a film club, Martial arts, Amateur dramatics, Table tennis and Musical performances.Furthermore
, From the year 2000 to 2005 film club was at the top of the list with almost 65 participants
in martial arts with some fluctuations. Amateur dramatics and Table tennis remained stable until 2005 but then
experienced a sudden boost and a drop until the year 2020.
Musical performances faced a downfall until 2005 when there were 0 participants
but after showed an upward trend reaching approximately 20 participants
by the year 2020Submitted by irsamahmood on
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