Many elderly people are not longer looked after their family, but are put in health homes. What are the advantages adn disadvantages of this trend?

Many seniors are not anymore being looked after

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blood family members, and

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they are placed in elderly homes.

One

of the advantages of

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is that they will have professional medical attention, and

other advantages

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another advantage

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is that they will practice physical activities during the day.

However

, the disadvantages are that they might feel abandoned and

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mistreated at these places.

One

of the advantages is that elderly

people

who

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in living assisting places are going to be attended by doctors, nurses and nurse aids to help them have a quality life.

Besides

this

, they will identify some diseases on time, and they will be treated in the same place.

Also

, if they suffer from an illness, nurses will keep a record of all the medical attention they

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in the living

center

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. Another advantage is that they are going to have daily activities like physical

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, yoga classes, and playing table games with other mature

people

. As

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, they might socialize with

people

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their age.

For instance

, in California, most elderly living

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have hundreds of elderly

people

livings in

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luxurious

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when their families have no time to take care of them, so they

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attention they need in living

centers

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.

One

of the disadvantages is that many elderly

people

who live in living assistance places feel abandoned by their relatives because their family members visit them once a month or once a year. If they

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once a month, they

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feeling rejected and not loved anymore, so they start sleeping more and eating less.

As a result

, they might get sick more frequently. Another drawback of living in these

centers

is that they might be mistreated in many ways like verbal abuse or physical

one

. Unfortunately, many careless workers might start abusing elder civilians who have no families that visit them, so they do not provide the service it was offered by these companies. To illustrate

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,

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many TV news in America, they have recorded elderly

people

who

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been treated in a careless way or

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have been bitten by

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staff because they have no family members who can notice

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. In conclusion. many elderly

people

who have no families that can look after

them

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are placed in living

centers

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, and

this

has positive aspects and negative ones. Positive aspects are that they might be treated in a professional way all the time, and they might have

variety

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of activities during the day.

However

, some negative aspects are that they might feel abandoned or

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verbal or physical abuse.