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their
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they are placed in elderly homes. Add a comma
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of the advantages of Use synonyms
this
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other advantages
is that they will practice physical activities during the day. Fix the agreement mistake
another advantage
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, the disadvantages are that they might feel abandoned and Linking Words
being
mistreated at these places.
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of the advantages is that elderly Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
is place
in living assisting places are going to be attended by doctors, nurses and nurse aids to help them have a quality life. Change the verb form
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this
, they will identify some diseases on time, and they will be treated in the same place. Linking Words
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have
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. Another advantage is that they are going to have daily activities like physical Change the spelling
centre
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one
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ones
people
. As Use synonyms
result
, they might socialize with Correct article usage
a result
people
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at
their age. Change preposition
apply
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, in California, most elderly living Linking Words
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centers
have hundreds of elderly Change the spelling
centres
people
livings in Use synonyms
a
luxurious Correct article usage
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place
when their families have no time to take care of them, so they Fix the agreement mistake
places
received
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receive
they
attention they need in living Correct your spelling
the
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centers
.
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centres
One
of the disadvantages is that many elderly Use synonyms
people
who live in living assistance places feel abandoned by their relatives because their family members visit them once a month or once a year. If they Use synonyms
are visiting
once a month, they Wrong verb form
visit
started
feeling rejected and not loved anymore, so they start sleeping more and eating less. Wrong verb form
start
As a result
, they might get sick more frequently. Another drawback of living in these Linking Words
centers
is that they might be mistreated in many ways like verbal abuse or physical Use synonyms
one
. Unfortunately, many careless workers might start abusing elder civilians who have no families that visit them, so they do not provide the service it was offered by these companies. To illustrate Use synonyms
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many TV news in America, they have recorded elderly Change preposition
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people
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had
been treated in a careless way or Wrong verb form
have
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apply
medical
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behavior
.
In conclusion. many elderly Change the spelling
behaviour
people
who have no families that can look after Use synonyms
them
are placed in living Change the pronoun
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centers
, and Change the spelling
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this
has positive aspects and negative ones. Positive aspects are that they might be treated in a professional way all the time, and they might have Linking Words
variety
of activities during the day. Add an article
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However
, some negative aspects are that they might feel abandoned or Linking Words
suffering
verbal or physical abuse.Wrong verb form
suffer