As a result of tourism and the increased number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Nowadays traveling by flying is considered one of the safest ways of travel. Planes have come a long way

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upgrades to have a strong title of safety. As for emissions, flying

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world

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carbon

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emission

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emissions

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yearly, and earlier studies show that only 10

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flies in most years. By 2019 annual

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world-wide

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passenger count was 4,56 billion people, but each year as the incomes rise, there’s a bigger demand for

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and flights, resulting in an emission rate doubling.

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emissions are growing faster and bigger each year, resulting in global warming and

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of wild animal species. As we all know global warming has been a dangerously important topic for the

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10+ years. It is a worldwide

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we see consequences every year.

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, flowers growing in Antarctica

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us a serious warming

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caused by greenhouse gases all over the

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, another example is the disappearance of white bears in Antarctica, which tells us the dangerous consequences of pollution and

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footprints.

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, because of the bigger demand

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traveling

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by air, flights are held more often, increasing the chance of plane crashes or other technical difficulties. We live in a

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full of technologies but we can’t outrun them or predict how would they react to different situations. Obviously, if there’s too much pressure

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the plane or other technologies, they will not run as smoothly as new.

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, as global warming is still a big worldwide

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, there have been actions taken by every country. Most countries choose to replace

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fuels with renewable energy

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sun, wind or water energy.

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, people are creating more

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carbon neutral

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gases to reduce additional

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waste.

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people have been encouraged to sort their trash to keep a cleaner earth and save the animals from pollution deaths. In conclusion,

carbon

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emission is a big worldwide

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causing not only global warming but

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harms wild animal species and human lives. But only we, as earth residents can reduce danger and keep our

home

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clean and safe from pollution.