Nowadays technology has advanced across the globe, new gadgets are innovated yearly. Everyone including
children
, has at least one of these
devices
with them
such
as
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. In
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modern life
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including education and
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done
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the help of these
devices
.
however
, a number of them spend
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on
smartphones
for entertainment. I believe alongside the few advantages
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smartphones
the
are more.
To begin
with, the main disadvantage is that spending hours on
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harm
children
's eyes. Their body
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still weak
due to
the harmful effects of radiation from the device.
For instance
, my
10 year oldAdd a hyphen
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brother used to spend hours on video
on
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smartphone
I
from his actions that he
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not see very clearly. The doctor said that the
had harmed his eyes permanently and he
also
said if he was older the damage would have been less. Now my brother is always getting
and he can not read comfortably The side
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that
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new
devices
have on
children
are
because it will affect their education life.
On the
hand, spending a lot of time on the cellphone could be addictive.
children
usually get
to things
,
if they learn to spend
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of their days on
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they will get addicted to them.
For example
, my little
Sam, is always on
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movies whenever I see him and
he could not complete grade three because he could
about in class was, when to get back home and watch
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of the series.
As a result
, Sam
all the subjects at school because, of his lack of
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with the
teacherFix the agreement mistake
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in the classes.
This
example
it Correct pronoun usage
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shows the importance of teaching
children
how to use
smartphones
.
To conclude
,
smartphones
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a lot of harmful impacts on
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kids in
fields
such
as education and health. Modern
devices
also
, make our
children
diss
to society. When they spend a lot of time with their
smartphones
they will forget how to communicate with
and make friends. I believe the best way to prevent that kind of
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parents should control their
children
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the time that they spend with phones and they should explain
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them what kind of
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it will cause them.