The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the average change in the
price
of copper
, nickel and zinc
for each month
threw 2014.
Overall
, we can see that the nickel was by far the highest percentage change at the beginning of the year
but ended as the lowest one
of the three at the end
of the year
. While
, zinc
started the year
with the lowest percentage change, although
it ended on
the highest point. Change preposition
at
Copper
price
had a limited range of variation.
In January the Fix the agreement mistake
prices
price
of nickle was up six per cent
, but by the middel
of the Correct your spelling
middle
year
at
Change preposition
in
june
it dropped to negative 3, Change the capitalization
June
finally
copper
ended the year
with one
per Correct article usage
a one
cent
rise. Copper
started with two
per Correct article usage
a two
cent
increase and the price
started dropping for the next six month
to reach slightly below negative Fix the agreement mistake
months
one
per cent
. However
, the price
raised
Verb problem
rose
at
the second half of the Change preposition
in
year
ending it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
with
a little below two Change preposition
at
percen
. Correct your spelling
per cent
Zinc
started with
Change preposition
at
one
percent
in January Change the spelling
per cent
raiseed
Correct your spelling
raised
alittle
to reach two per Correct your spelling
a little
little
cent
in the next month
then
it started
reduce slowly until Add the particle
started to
june
reached negative Change the capitalization
June
one
and continued the next four month
with limited movement, Fix the agreement mistake
months
Zinc
ended the last
quarter of the year
with a slightly
increase Change the adverb
slight
reaced
2 Correct your spelling
reached
percent
as the highest Change the spelling
per cent
one
of the three.Submitted by seifhasseb222 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, zinc, month, year, one, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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