The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the average change in the
price
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copper
, nickel and Use synonyms
zinc
for each Use synonyms
month
threw 2014.
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Overall
, we can see that the nickel was by far the highest percentage change at the beginning of the Linking Words
year
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one
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at the end
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year
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zinc
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year
with the lowest percentage change, Use synonyms
although
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at
Copper
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price
had a limited range of variation.
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prices
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cent
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middel
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middle
year
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at
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in
june
it dropped to negative 3, Change the capitalization
June
finally
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copper
ended the Use synonyms
year
with Use synonyms
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one
per Correct article usage
a one
cent
rise. Use synonyms
Copper
started with Use synonyms
two
per Correct article usage
a two
cent
increase and the Use synonyms
price
started dropping for the next six Use synonyms
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month
to reach slightly below negative Fix the agreement mistake
months
one
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cent
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price
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rose
at
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in
year
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it
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apply
with
a little below two Change preposition
at
percen
. Correct your spelling
per cent
Zinc
started Use synonyms
with
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at
one
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percent
in January Change the spelling
per cent
raiseed
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raised
alittle
to reach two per Correct your spelling
a little
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cent
in the next Use synonyms
month
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then
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started
reduce slowly until Add the particle
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june
reached negative Change the capitalization
June
one
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month
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months
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last
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year
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slightly
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reached
percent
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per cent
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, zinc, month, year, one, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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