A group of
present the view that
teenagerFix the agreement mistake
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are more happy than
adults
,
whereas
otherFix the agreement mistake
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believe that people are more satisfied
aboutChange the preposition
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their lives when they are
adultFix the agreement mistake
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. I strongly agree with the latter
.
On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that they can enjoy
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life when they are
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. They are in
that
adults
often have income and are independent.
Thus
, they can make
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regardless of their
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opinions.
are old enough to travel alone.
Such
individuals are able to spend their money on whatever they want.
As a result
, there is no pressure on them and they can make
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about their futures. Having
such
freedom
provideCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them happiness. As an example,
parents
in some cases force children to
their entertainment
according to
parent's
. It is possible that a teenager wants to play football
while
their
parents
force them to play a musical instrument.
On the other hand
,
an otherCorrect your spelling
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group of people claim that they have
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joyful time in their teenage years as they have
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responsibilities in
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to
. They do not
need to have
as their
parents
provide them with money. Supporting family members in hard
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is really demanding and nobody
expectChange the verb form
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children to solve hard problems.
Adults
should be always there for family members.
TeenagerFix the agreement mistake
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are often
easy goingCorrect your spelling
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and do not
every thingCorrect your spelling
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seriousChange the word
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.
Therefore
, they have less stressful lives.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as
adults
have
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horizonsCorrect pronoun usage
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an are and are able reach to huge dreams.
For instance
, they can have a dream
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going to dangerous places, like high rise
mountainFix the agreement mistake
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,
while
teenagers often are not allowed to go to
such
places.
To conclude
, in my view, individuals are more happy when they are
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. They can earn money and spend it in every field that they want.
Moreover
,
adults
are more
to reach their dreams and enjoy them.