The Chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows the percentages of people of different ages who visited a local cinema in 2000.
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55 and older constituted the highest proportion.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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