The Chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows the percentages of people of different ages who visited a local cinema in 2000.
Overall
, it was found that people
whose
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
age
Wrong verb form
aged
show examples
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
55 and older constituted the highest proportion.
Submitted by jawdat.lubadeh123 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: