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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart above displays the potential
oil
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 production
capacity
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 for 6
gulf
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 nations during a 20-year period.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Saudi Arabia had the most
oil
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 output by far from the other countries.
In contrast
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, Qatar had the lowest
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capacity
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 over the whole period. Looking at the information in more detail, since the year 1990 until 2010, Saudi Arabia had the largest
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capacity
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.
Within almost
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 80% of the whole
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 production in
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 nations. and reached its peak with more than 14
million
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 in 2010.
While
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 Qatar had the least
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 production among other
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 countries. At less than one
million
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 over the 20-year time.
On the other hand
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, Iran increased slightly over the years to hit 4
million
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 in 2010.
Also
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, Iraq and Kuwait's
capacity
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 grew from nearly 2
million
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 to below 4
million
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.
Moreover
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, the USE peak was
also
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 below 4
million
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 in 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, capacity, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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