The chart below shows the household number in US by their annual income

The chart below shows the household number in US by their annual income
The Bar Chart illustrate the number of households in the US which is divided into 5 categories of their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. The categories consist of less than $25.000, $25.000 to $49.999, $50.000 to $74.999, $75.000 to $99.999 and more than $100.000.
Overall
, all groups have increased
the
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household populations except the middle-income groups ($50.000 to $74.999 and $75.000 to $99.999) which experienced stagnancy. Highest paid family which earns more than $100.000 per year, had right under 30
million
households in 2007 but slightly decreased to around 27
million
two years later.
However
, They rose significantly in 2015 to approximately 38
million
which is the highest out of all categories. The middle-income groups have no population growth. the $50.000 to $74.999 household only has slightly over 20
million
and the other one just under 15
million
which is the lowest of the population. In conclusion, the data show the lowest and the highest annual income
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have added populations meanwhile the other group does not have the same condition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household income
  • income brackets
  • trend analysis
  • income distribution
  • economic policies
  • inflation
  • job market
  • notable shifts
  • overall trend
  • low-income households
  • middle-income households
  • high-income households
  • time periods
  • factors contributing
  • implications
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