The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates amounts of humans that practice four various kinds of sport namely basketball, tennis , badminton and rugby from basketball and badminton
year
1985 to 2005.
Overall
, the most significant feature is about
Change preposition
that
Correct article usage
the
players
figures changed slightly throughout the 20 years while
rugby
and tennis Change preposition
in rugby
which
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
players
swapped dramatically.
To begin
with Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
practicer of
rugby sports Replace the word
practising
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
records
the highest Fix the agreement mistake
record
number
in the year
1985 at roughly 250 then
the number
dropped sharply to 50 players
at the end
of the period. However
, tennis players
numbers were 150 after twenty years number
increased gradually to 220 Add an article
the number
players
in the year
2005.
On the other hand
, badminton players
figure
Verb problem
apply
were
approximately 50 in the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
year
1985 and remained the same till the end of time with Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly changed
Replace the word
slight change
also
basketball games players
were I totally
Change the word
total
almost
75 and Change preposition
of almost
this
number
didn't change from the year
1985 to 2005.Submitted by may.al.zemami on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, players, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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