The maps below show the centre of a small towm called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small towm called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate how the
town
centre
of Islip is expected to be redeveloped from its current setup.
It is clear that
the
town
centre
is
due to
undergo significant redevelopment, notably the addition of a new transport network and
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other commercial facilities, at the expense of some of the green belt around the
town
. At present, Islip
town
centre
comprises a series of shops with a. main
road
running through the
centre
of the
town
. To the
south
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there are two housing estates. A park is
situat- ed
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situated
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to the east and a school is located to the
south-west
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southwest
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. The future of Islip will look rather different with the main shopping area being radically transformed, affecting some of the countryside. The central
road
will be converted to a pedestrian area and a brand-new ring
road
will be constructed around the
town
. The shops to the north will be converted
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into
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a shopping
centre
, car park, bus station and some new housing. The shops to the south of the former main
road
will remain. The park will lose some of its size
as a result
of the dual carriageway and the housing and school will remain fairly unchanged.
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