the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The diagrams show how recycling
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bottles be reproduced. The process starts with the public dropping waste bottles in trash bins, which will be sent to the recycling centre by the trash lorries and
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sorted into recyclable and non-recyclable by labour. It is followed by compressing into blocks through high-pressurized machines and crushing the blocks. After the blocks are crushed into small pieces of
plastic
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, they will be washed in a specific liquid and sent to a machine to produce
plastic
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pellets, which will be heated to form raw material. In the final step, after becoming a kind of raw material, it can be used to produce end products,
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as T-shirts, pencils and new
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bottles and it can still be recycled after being used.
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, there are 9 stages in
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recycling, beginning with the public throwing out the recyclable rubbish and ending with reproducing new recyclable products.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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