You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the data on
average
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the average
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amount of individuals who visited a
museum
in
summer
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the summer
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and winter of 2023.
Overall
, most of the people
prefered
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prefer
to go to the
museum
in
summer
rather than winter.
It is clear that
in both of the seasons, the maximum was observed at the period of the day between 11:00 and 12:00, meanwhile fewest individuals like
museum
visits
at the end
of the day, particularly at 18:00.
However
,
visitors
mainly entered museums in
summer
,
additionally
the best performance constituted more than 1400 individuals at midday. Starting from 9:00 till 12:00 an upward trend is observed among
summer
visitors
, which started from a little bit more than 200
visitors
and peaked at 1500. After midday amount got reduced modestly every hour and ended up below 200
visitors
by the end of the day. Obviously, fewer people went to the
museum
in winter, the maximum was 600
visitors
. It
also
should be mentioned that 12:00 is the most visited hour here too. Between 10:00 and 12:00 flactuation was seen, after which a downward trend was observed.
Furthermore
, from 15:00 until 18:00 amount gets stabile, reaching the minimum.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, summer, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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